Chloe Connell and I created a padlet, on which people entered responses regarding their thoughts on our draft pitch. This can be viewed in my previous post. After taking what our respondents had to into consideration, we adjusted our narrative. As well as this we learnt what to avoid, and what to do in particular when developing our ideas further.
For example one respondent suggested to ensure that our script is realistic. When creating our script, we will attempt to make the dialogue typical of the age of our actors. Our actors will be representing 'typical' teenagers; therefore we will avoid making our dialogue formal.
Another suggestion was to make sure that the narrative is filmed in a clear order. This is there is a lot happening. If we find it to difficult to stick to certain things whilst filming or editing, we may get rid of it. An example of this could be 'Tiffany' viewing a dark figure in her polaroid picture. If this effect is too difficult to achieve when editing, we may opt to leave it out.
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